When people chapters literally look like this
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Intro
Hope you enjoy
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
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SORRY
CONTEST
CHAPTER 3
CONTEST WINNER
Q AND A
REQUESTS?
HELP
SORRY AGAIN
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Chapter 4
AND SO ON. U think u get the point. I mean seriously like it will have 21 parts to the story then 19 parts of it is just random stuff.
When Percy is ALWAYS the main person.
Ok yes he is PERCY JACKSON there's a whole series about him but I mean this is fan fiction understand?
Ok so why can't a story be revolved around Grover or Travis or Connor or some other character maybe even Malcolm. Why is it always Percy? Not gonna lie I LOVE Percy he's my top favorite but I mean come on.
When the dialogue is like this
"Oh" Percy said
"Yah" Annabeth replied
"So now what?" Percy asked
"I don't know."Annabeth said back.
OK ADD MORE.
Like
"Hey Annabeth is the gang still coming over?." Percy asked with a curious look plastered on his face.
"Yah were still on for the movie night and all that, that we had planned." Annabeth answers back, taking a drink of her water.
THATS NOT THE BEST EXAMPLE BUT ITS BETTER THEN WHATEVER THE HECK PEOPLE ACTUALLY USE.
why not in MORTAL AU's Chiron can walk.
Like it's not Greek world. It would be nice to see a story where Chiron walks for once.
Grover is still MIA(unless u have finished the dark prophecy)ANYWAYS
FRAZEL!!! I WILL SAY THIS IN EVERY CHAPTER IF I HAVE TO!
When authors blame it all on school and life,
"Oh sorry I didn't update for 3 years school has got me busy"
Can you not.
My excuse is not even one I always say
"I update when I feel inspired. Deal with it. Don't like it leave."
Now I've seen reasons as too.
Either they have been dealing with a mental illness
Family emergency
Medical issues
I needed a break for a while due to my depression.
Or somewhere amongst those lines
I've seen it all. Those are REAL and serious reasons.If your reason is school don't even bother putting it in there cuz it's not even worth it.
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Worst moments in PJO fanfics
RandomRant of everything wrong in PJO fan fics. From cringey plot lines to just the smallest things that make me wanna burn my eyes out. Read if you think any PJO fanfic is cringey and are looking for someone to agree with.
